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2023-04-01 12:47

La historia empieza con un poco de suspenso sobre en que lugar se encuentra el protagonista lo que hace que el espectador se enganche con lo siguiente que pasara y durante su desarrollo le quedó perfecto 👌, tiene mucho potencial el fic por lo que doy como calificación un 1000[img=exp]

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Mmm.. yes definitely understand

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Here’s the google translate The story begins with a bit of suspense about where the protagonist is, which makes the viewer hooked with the next thing that happened and during its development it was perfect or, the fic has a lot of potential, so I give as a rating a 1000p

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