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the story and world bulding is good and the effort put by the author is good too but the life of mc feels like a puppet who couldnt control his own life and is being controlled by the sects elder i hope author and improve this feeling

Lei Jin (Martial Peak)

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I'm not sure how far you reached, but I did not intend on making him feel like that. Only a few aspects of his life are "controlled", these things are easily noticeable due to the nature of them. However, all of them are things I imagine a Pillar Disciple being put through. Think of it like the MC is a step above in importance to even a core disciple. As such he is given massive authority over certain things, with a trade off of course. In either case though, Lei Jin, becomes a true leader and back bone to the human race. Not so much controlled, as he is now burdened with massive responsibilities.