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you read fanfic becauss you want to see your favorite canon characters in action or self insert yourself into the story loved by your favorite characters? jokes on you, thia fic is all about OC characters interacting and in relationship with OC characters while all your favorite characters of this fandom and girls is sidelined into mere supporting or figuran. enjoy

Lei Jin (Martial Peak)

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Thanks for taking time to write a review. However, while I do appreciate feedback, it would be nice if I could tell that the commenter had read the synopsis of the book they are reviewing. Perhaps it was missed? Ignored? Or something else, I don't know. But: "Follow Lei Jin's story as he grows into a great man. " This clearly states that the story will follow Lei Jin. As he literally fixes all the problems within the series. I don't know how far you read into the series. But I sincerely hope you read far enough to warrant a review while also not far enough to realize that the story doesn't just interact with OC's ALL the time. My Series was originally meant as a method to convey ideas about fixing plot holes and adding lore that was sorely lacking within the main series. While also saving Yang Kai some BS. He already had enough of it as it is. So I took the creative liberty to give him what he should have had ever since the Inheritance war arc. A child with the woman he loves. Perhaps this story wasn't for you. And that is okay. It's a shame, but... It's alright. Not everyone is going to like the same stuff. But, don't go telling others what they read fanfiction for. Not everyone reads it for the same reasons. And not everyone writes it for the same reasons. Hopefully, you find something you enjoy.