The author has a nice idea for a story, but the execution is wrong. The story doesn't properly introduce the world background nor the characters. Moreover, each chapter has some details of the interactions missing, making it harder to understand and keep up with what is happening.On the other hand, the author's english and language structure is very good, no complaints there.
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