Review Detail of Hellycomic in I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

Like I said, if I get more comments about Yuta, then I will have his story as well and if not then I won't do his story at all.

A story can have multiple protagonist

Actually no, it's either one MC or none at all. Don't mistake the difference between a MC and a Male/Female Lead. They're not the same thing. GOT is an example of having no MC, but it has a bunch of Male/Female Leads. The entire premise of a MC is that their is only one, and the story is centered around said singular character.

A story can have multiple protagonists. Just because it’s normal to have one, doesn’t mean that there can’t be more. Telling an imaginative story shouldn’t be bound by what has been done before.

It can have multiple Male/Female leads yes. But they can't be defined as a MC at that point. Word misuse, is rather extensive. MC =/= Protagonist =/= Male/Female lead. Not the same thing, all three have different meanings and uses in writing.

why are you wasting ur breath on this idiot

lol I think this guy means that if 2 MC's exist they would always end up as enemies and kill one another... like one would want what the other had or one would feel slighted by the other... I mean in a wolf pack you can't have more than one alfa... they would end up fighting and the loser would be a beta.

Protagonist is not MC. In books any character with active/passive role in a story is(or can be) a protagonist. IRL we are all protagonists of each other stories and MC of our own(as long as our path intersect). But let's face it multiple protagonists rarely works like those with multiple point of view, you end up loosing the progress of the story.

Here is another comment so dont do the story!

Author why do I feel so uncomfortable reading this story, even though I don't mind yuri in MC harem, but I feel like our MC is full of green hats by teaching the OG protagonist how to seduce women and make him a harem

I mean the OG protagonist had two or three girls, and he won't interfere with MC's girl. Moreover there is no Yuri anymore, i thought of a different story line, so Yuri cancelled. The OG protagonist loves a woman, that woman is Ayumi, and MC doesn't love Ayumi. So no green hat. The uncomfortable feelings might be because you are seeing another male in this novel that might have harem like MC.

but MC has no intention of sending another woman besides Ayumi to the OG Protagonist, right? I'm really disgusted with the MC who likes to give women to other people, especially since the woman is considered beautiful in her description, especially as the MC has the intention of teaching the OG protagonist to be an alpha and how to seduce women, it makes me feel very uncomfortable (I've only read up to 58)

Nah, MC won't send his woman or any woman he wanted to be in a relationship to OG Protagonist. MC only teaches OG Protagonist not to be simp and understand his value, be confidence. OG Protagonist is the most handsome guy in the world, so of course he will get a beautiful woman in his harem as well. However out of 100 chapters, only 10 or 15 chapters will be about OG Protagonist and his harem.

Also, MC didn't send Ayumi to the OG Protagonist. OG Protagonist met Ayumi first and established a relationship. Later OG Protagonist took MC to meet Ayumi, and because MC met Ayumi, he got Yui. In one way, OG Protagonist helped MC to get Yui. All girls OG Protagonist are girls MC would had never met if weren't OG Protagonist get them in his harem.

All girls that OG Protagonist has in harem are girls that MC would never have met if OG Protagonist didn't get in his harem.