The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys.
WhiteNightingale
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LIKEWhiteNightingale:I am currently thinking of having one female lead. So no harem.
bro thinking isnt strongest part of webnovels writers so what did u decide on? and pls write what u want and not what your audience wants, many writers lose passion for their work if they r forced to write something they dont want
WhiteNightingale:I am currently thinking of having one female lead. So no harem.
Have you decided if there is going to be romance? And if it’s going to be one love interest or more?
WhiteNightingale:I am currently thinking of having one female lead. So no harem.
Late to the game here, but great job so far. I thought 70,000 dead lives was extreme, and I would like to see a couple of the people survive and pop up throughout the story. However, I get the setup. Personally, I agree with no harem. I see the harem trope too often. It’s typically used to inflate the greatness of the hero. He’s so great that one woman can’t hold him, but to take a decisive hero and then make him indecisive with women creates an unnecessary flaw. However, there is an opportunity to explore a polyamorous type relationship as opposed to a harem. That would be original.
WhiteNightingale:I am currently thinking of having one female lead. So no harem.
Yea, original way of getting bombed with 1 star reviews. That together with y*ri, NTR and other such tags don't work on webnovel.
NeverUMind:Late to the game here, but great job so far. I thought 70,000 dead lives was extreme, and I would like to see a couple of the people survive and pop up throughout the story. However, I get the setup. Personally, I agree with no harem. I see the harem trope too often. It’s typically used to inflate the greatness of the hero. He’s so great that one woman can’t hold him, but to take a decisive hero and then make him indecisive with women creates an unnecessary flaw. However, there is an opportunity to explore a polyamorous type relationship as opposed to a harem. That would be original.
FallenAngeI:Yea, original way of getting bombed with 1 star reviews. That together with y*ri, NTR and other such tags don't work on webnovel.
harem? yes or no? romance? yes or no?.. and if there is romance or harem in this.. then ffs change you freaking tags so that people know!..
WhiteNightingale:I am currently thinking of having one female lead. So no harem.
I've been enjoying the novel so far, recently got to the part where the Duke reached the city and things went 0-100 real quick. I gotta say, this is the first part of the story that i currently dont like. Im not saying the Duke cant do what he does, but it shouldn't be without consequences from the other dukes and king/emperor. For a mage to easily do that, regardless of rank would be idiotic. You have loss of a city, resources, incomes for the country, etc, whilst undermining the countrys current ruler.I hope you dont gloss this over in the future. otherwise its just way to over the top to establish a forced 'villian'/'antagonist'.that being said, ive been enjoying the story so far, and look forward to where it goes.
FallenAngeI:Yea, original way of getting bombed with 1 star reviews. That together with y*ri, NTR and other such tags don't work on webnovel.
Mina Fin and Seth are together. Polyamorous. There’s no detailed scenes that I can remember. And all the characters were written as sexually open from the get go.
FallenAngeI:I have the first 150-ish chapters, what happens later on?
NeverUMind:Mina Fin and Seth are together. Polyamorous. There’s no detailed scenes that I can remember. And all the characters were written as sexually open from the get go.