Review Detail of DubiousTone in Bloodstone Academy

I've read Through this multiple times and their are a lot of things I like about it. It is a little bit dark, but its tagged as such so I cant complain. I feel like the passing is pretty good, and the general concept and characters are all established right away, so theirs no waiting around until chapter 5 for the story to really get started. but the best thing about it is the way is written very good grammar and spacing great job!