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Item: moved it is
Rating: 4.6

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DarkLord_Lv21yrDarkLord_

Review till ch-7 The start was a pretty great hook, the descriptions and grammar could use some work but, the plot was captivating. I am pretty caught up with the novel and I hope to see more of it, PEACE OUT ✌️

moved it is

Unsoph

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DarkLord_Lv2DarkLord_

Yes, the time travel and description can use some more work, good luck.

Unsoph:Thank you for the review, I will be sure to work them out. While I am at it, I will change things in first chapter and such to give a more in-depth explanation of time travel and such!

1yr

UnsophAuthorUnsoph

Thank you for the review, I will be sure to work them out. While I am at it, I will change things in first chapter and such to give a more in-depth explanation of time travel and such!

1yr