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2023-07-19 01:40

The plot is very simple, but the storytelling is quite interesting to read. The narrative is quite easy to understand. However, it would recommend you to split or seperate some long paragraph and make it more easier for reader to read. Overall, this work is quite well done and I like it. btw, her dad have an affair with her friend 9 year ago. isn't that mean he is pedo?

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luwanipixie
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Thank you Btw her Dad isn't pedo....lol...he cheated on her mom please continue reading as I update to learn more

NewbieJimjim
NewbieJimjimLv3

Oh, I missed read, I interpret that her father cheat with Scarlett friend instead of her mother friend 😂😂😂

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