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JustPassingBy
JustPassingByLv51yr
2023-09-12 17:50

For Writing Quality, for me it is already good enough for reading so that 5 star, in story development, it is slow in the beginning and it will progress more faster at the later chapter so it alright for me (for the one who want to know when it will begin, it was on 200 chapter in the raw, to be exact when the MC arrive at True Treasure Pavillion Headquarter), and for me that another 5 star (yeah I don't have any prejudice with story as long as it is didn't scream plot armor at every moment with bad storytelling). For character design, don't bother, even I who read the raw didn't know what appearance they have (the MC, and his wives, and his acquaintance), I only know their name, so that 3 star for me (yeah it was my pity to grade that high). For updating it was 5 star just because the author still updating the story till this day (the raw at the moment is 313), yeah you really want to grade it 5 star because of that. I already have enough of author who drop the story out of nowhere. For.world background, sadly there wasn't any detail enough beside the usually cultivation info, but it will be better at 250 chapter in calamity arc. So overall it was 4.4 star from me. If you like slice of life with enough realistic kind of experience in cultivation genre then do try to read this, after all you will know that this will mostly focus in slice of life cause of the title, if you want a battle kind of novel, this is not yours taste

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The author explains his wife as "she was not gorgeous, but she was delicate and beautiful" and "she was a little young girl that looks like she was 28 years old". I'm a mortal and I don't understand this language of the gods.

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