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YoungMasterFox
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Seems like a good book with a slow pace in the beginning, though, it allows for the character building and world development to affirm themselves.It's nice that it's not a generic Harem troope, and seems like the feelings between MC and FL would be slowly developed in time.Interesting concept of Abilities, I'm really curious about the second one, Uncrowned King; if this doesn't sound menacingly powerful, I don't know what would be.Also, I'm at the latest ch released, 42? Something.All I can say is that this is definitely worth giving a read, especially because it's quite simple to read, and even a fourth grader can understand it.10/10 - for now, please don't disappoint us author.PS. Waiting for the juicy chapter

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My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Zefyr

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kaval187
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oops it's got the name spelling wrong

kaval187:too bad I can't post a review on the best web novel that was never written titled unavailable anymore by Zyphr. with the best 4 Chapters that don't exist 😀 it would be mildly amusing to get a bunch of internet trolls to make it number 1 with loads's of 5 star reviews , rockets racecars and the like(it would be like people paying to crack a joke )
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Zefyr
ZefyrAuthorZefyr

Thanks for the review.It was intentionally slow paced, as I don't want to write a half azzed story, with too many plot holes and things like that. (tho, I may have some plot holes in the future)As for the juicy chapters... Yes there will be R18's in the future, but I want to give my characters the necessary time and a good moment for it.Not like: OMG you're so beautiful!Wow thanks! Let's go to my room~Thanks for the understanding, about my lack of 'smoothly' introducing such things :P

Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15Sil3nt_1

Not gonna lie this novel would perfect if it didn't follow the same lame trope as every other novel where the MC acts weak, hides his power blah blah. I have grown so tired of reading books with that trope so it's frustrating seeing a potentially good story have such a trope.

Zefyr
ZefyrAuthorZefyr

Don't worry, if you're at the current with the last chapter, you'll see that it's not spinning billions of chapters lol

Sil3nt_1:Not gonna lie this novel would perfect if it didn't follow the same lame trope as every other novel where the MC acts weak, hides his power blah blah. I have grown so tired of reading books with that trope so it's frustrating seeing a potentially good story have such a trope.
kaval187
kaval187Lv4kaval187

too bad I can't post a review on the best web novel that was never written titled unavailable anymore by Zyphr. with the best 4 Chapters that don't exist 😀 it would be mildly amusing to get a bunch of internet trolls to make it number 1 with loads's of 5 star reviews , rockets racecars and the like(it would be like people paying to crack a joke )

Dorcas_Oloruntoba
Dorcas_OloruntobaLv1Dorcas_Oloruntoba

I love this novel