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Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor1yr
2023-11-11 08:29

Wow! First time I forgot to leave a review for my own book. How could I be so shameless and forget about it?! Tsk... First of all, I'd like to say that if the story seems to be a bit slow paced in the beginning, it's because it truly is so. The character building and world development will probably take some time, but it's just because I don't want to mess up, so please be patient with this poor soul. I don't want to rush things anymore and just *Insert* words. For this reason, some characters and mentions about some *things*(heard it's called foreshadowing, hopefully I did it right) would probably be forgotten by the readers(you) and only remembered after 100 chapters or so.(and yes, there will be things like that, just pay attention :p) Adventure/Action - YesMystery - So so(I'd like to think that I'm going to surprise you at every step) Harem - NoR18/Romance - Yes(It will be slow at the beginning, but somewhere around mid-late second volume things will change)If someone has a question to ask, please don't hesitate to reply to this post. Thank you for reading not only the story, but this review too. This sentence is here only because I wanted to waste your time, sorry. But since you saw that, you were curious about this one too, truly sorry, better go back to read, and don't waste your time anymore. Peace :>

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ImaginarySnow
ImaginarySnowLv4

will the mc always be 'the strong acting week'?

Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

Nope!

ImaginarySnow:will the mc always be 'the strong acting week'?
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

who is the fl?

Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

Chapter 15?

HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

thanks, mind also teling me what the life span is for humans with abilities and MC?

Zefyr:Chapter 15?
Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

I think it will be considered a small spoiler, it will be explained in ch138 or smth(not posted yet)<S Class - 100 years>S Class, SS ,SSS - 150 yearsProto 200 yearsSky 250 yearsDisaster 300 yearsCatastrophe 350 yearsApocalypse 400 years Demi God 500 yearsGod 1000 years Holy 3000 years

HugoGreyrat:thanks, mind also teling me what the life span is for humans with abilities and MC?
DildoDunker
DildoDunkerLv14

So the mc will be acting weak and pathetic ???

Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

There won't be cases of acting pathetic, but he will hide his powers for a while. At ch100 it will be revealed, but he will fight with other powerful people and beings before that. So don't worry

DildoDunker:So the mc will be acting weak and pathetic ???
DildoDunker
DildoDunkerLv14

Will there be strong acting weak after revealing it

Zefyr:There won't be cases of acting pathetic, but he will hide his powers for a while. At ch100 it will be revealed, but he will fight with other powerful people and beings before that. So don't worry
Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

Nah, no more reason to do so

DildoDunker:Will there be strong acting weak after revealing it
Liam_Virgoking
Liam_VirgokingLv10

Please take a look at my book SHATTERED REFLECTIONS: THE TEMPTATIONS OF BEAUTY🙏🏿

Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13

What was your inspiration for using this Title for your book.

Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

At the beginning, it was supposed to be called "Conqueror of Light: Last Apostle", later on, due to the low quality of romance I envisioned at the time, I thought of completely changing the plot to make the late blooming romance start earlier, and also changed the FL from the last villain of the book to early heroine hahaha! I had to modify the plot a lot and change some characters and arcs so it will make sense, but I'd say it's quite okayish. I don't regret my decision though, it's refreshing to try and write a power couple thing, despite my lack of experience hehe This question truly made my day, no one thought of asking me this, I have to thank you for that! P.S the situation around the FL is complicated, so please be patient and wait for my few hints here and there to get a full picture :) Alright, I think I foreshadowed and gave you and those reading this comment enough info that may come back and bite me in the future. Have a good day and enjoy reading ~

Deadly_Healer:What was your inspiration for using this Title for your book.
Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14

no harem tag, nice power system and betrayed MC?? lets try[img=update][img=update]

Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

I want to make sure before reading… There is no harem, right? (only 1 fl/gf)

Zefyr:Nope!
Zefyr
ZefyrAuthor

No harem, it's a single FL! :)

Yuki_55:I want to make sure before reading… There is no harem, right? (only 1 fl/gf)
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