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Review Detail of Undeadk in Contracted Marriage: THE CEO IS MINE!

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I'm not a big fan of urban Shoujo novels, so I won't comment on the story. I just want to leave a suggestion: It would be good to separate the lines of the characters in paragraphs and not just with quotes. It makes it very easy for readers to navigate the story. I hope you maintain your excitement and that you develop your story masterfully.

Contracted Marriage: THE CEO IS MINE!

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Thanks tho.. I'll work on it