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2023-03-20 17:49

for as far as I've read, it is pretty good, there is very little for me to point out here, there aren't any glaring writing issues, no overly corny dialogues, and the progression seems to be going at a good pace, really nice overall, would recommend.

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jmjackie
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Excellent hook! The story of Ares is a captivating tale of a young man's journey of self-discovery in a world filled with magic and adventure. The author's writing style is engaging, and the plot is well-thought-out, with intriguing twists and turns that keep readers on the edge of their seats. This story has a lot of potential and leaves readers wanting more. Encouraging the author to continue and update the story regularly will surely keep readers eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)

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If you are looking for a story with good plot, lively characters and the best potential, This is the book. Am hoping that the author will not slack on updating chapters"_"

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I like the story . it's pretty good.i like the pilot.💜💜💜

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Maxemillian
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I really like it, it's definitely my genre and it reminds me of my own novel. The writing quality and story development is good and the characters are well written. An overall good novel.

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