This story is pretty well balanced. MC isn't perfect, but I like it. it's kinda refreshing. I just think it'll be nice when ml can communicate more openly and let mc know his thoughts and feelings. Kinda sus how she initially approached him and how she's hiding stuff, i think if ml finds out late, it'll be a whole thing. Or not. Tbh, i think mc should just be open with her parents. ik its hard for her to see it, but her parents love her, and her being like this is just hurting everyone. But i do hope this gets picked. I wanna see mc grow as a person and see where the story goes from here.
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