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BabyLoveSweets
BabyLoveSweetsLv131yr
2023-09-07 11:12

REVIEW UNTIL CHAPTER 74: TRANSLATION QUALITY: NEEDS EDITING AND PROOFREADING With its constant pronoun mixed-ups and name confusion it ruins the fun and enjoyment of reading this story! From Chapter 1 until Chapter 26, the author or translator kept refering to Huo Sicheng (ML) mobility as “WALKING”. He is still sitting on his electric wheelchair ok!!!😤😤😤. It was not revealed yet that he can walk. He never revealed it himself nor was he caught by the FL. But the story kept saying, “HE WALKED TOWARDS HER… HE WALKED” There were hints after like PA Chu Yu saying he’s not going to be forever be wheelchair bound not be a crippled. Or when Qi Xiaoze said he saw the ML in their (with FL) boxing club training too. But the FL never saw the ML walking not stand on his own. The FL Gu Qingcheng is hot tempered and quite violent. She had a clear goal at the start but ending up neglecting it because of her lovelife issues with Huo Sicheng. I would like to know how could the ML have an albino son Huo Xuan. Or how could they give birth to him when FL is only 22 and the child is in kindergarten (4-6 years old?) My take, not worth it to use coins when the translation team did not make an effort to clean up their work. But this is still an okay book to read. [img=proud][img=angry]

Wedding Night! A Regretful Marriage to Her Disabled Rival!

Jia Na
3.2
419 Chs

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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Proceeding with caution[img=thinking]

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Moonorchid_
Moonorchid_Lv14

Honestly, it will be very frustrating to read a novel of this caliber, they both have trust issues and the author doesn't do well to clarify one misunderstanding after the other, and it seemed like the author is hell-bent on making the ml see the fl with other males in the most intimate situation possible. It wouldn't be so frustrating to read if each of those situations gets clarified before creating another one. The plot and its development are very good but, it was delivered poorly according to me

1yr

VoidDreamer
VoidDreamerLv4

I didn't quite like it, he doesn't even try to trust her, he treats her horribly and always misunderstands... at least to the point where I read... Judge for yourself, here's the raws: 新婚夜！她悔婚嫁给残疾死对头

1yr
Turpz
TurpzLv15

I really hate a moron ML. With all his powers to monitor the woman he loves, he goes blind with jealousy and all those inside his head. Ugh! Why did I read this story. If I were the FL, i will surely leave this weak ML childishly drowning in his self-pity

1yr
Kellymari
KellymariLv14

It's interesting, I wasn't fully sure what to expect from the title and book preview but it's worth a read honestly

1yr
Dawn_in_clouds
Dawn_in_cloudsLv2

Worst development. In all the 40 chapters I have read all I have gotten is serious headache. There must be adequate misunderstanding,but [img=faceslap] Brainless leads

1yr
Bingereader0w0
Bingereader0w0Lv15

No longer continuing the story. The misunderstandings are back to back, the characters don’t have common sense nor a back bone, and the hole just gets dug deeper. Even if they resolve the many issues they have (they STILL haven’t in all the chapters available), the groveling can’t make up for the many mistakes at this point. She never cheated on him or disrespected him in their marriage but he expects her to know how he treats her and reciprocate despite doing it all IN SECRET!!! He constantly disrespects her even if it somehow ends up being an act later on, the hurt and emotional abuse is real. She doesn’t take many cautionary measures despite being taken back in time and doesn’t bring him or communicate with him beforehand to avoid what could’ve been avoided. It’s all a mess, she has little to no friends, and his acquaintance hate/disrespect her.

1yr
Wudai293
Wudai293Lv5

One often worst “novel” I have ever read!!! It belongs in the trash! Each chapter just keeps getting worse and worse. FL is a complete moron and the ML is just as bad. Both have bad communication skills, and the nonsense just made me lose my brain cells. I do not recommend reading this trash!

1yr
Miz1_BeMo
Miz1_BeMoLv15

I have stopped at chapter 90, and it's getting ready to start another round of drama. Yuck. I'm really, really tired of the FL's constant irrational temper tantrums, the constant drama and the constant misunderstandings. I also hate the ML's malicious butler. I'm dropping this book. I'm not spending more coins to stay upset and unable to enjoy reading.

1yr
Spades_1
Spades_1Lv4

Please don't read unless u want worst melodramatic scene. ML and FL "LOVE" each other so dearly that they don't TRUST each other ... Don't UNDERSTAND each other... Don't give proper RESPECT .. Don't listen to explanation .. Worse than Low IQ patients... They'll stubbornly believe what they "SEE" The NPC also complicate things and give us headache 🥴

1yr
plucking_star
plucking_starLv7

For the whole chapter all trust issue, misunderstanding & repeat again and again.ML & FL characters so childish. Just stop reading.Not worthy to continue reading unless author changes storyline for better.

1yr
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