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Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv47mth
2024-04-26 20:22

Here's my third review for the fic . the fic was good in early stages and kept fluctuating in between i.e it had some good thing and some cringe things , but now has gone downhill from chap 63 . spoiler in reply.

Friendly Neighborhood Youtuber Spider-man

KamBroFam123ERT
4.3
115 Chs

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Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

He got pretty roughed in fight with warmonger , lost his powers and got cancer . he is shame to the spider-man community even more than Peter Benjamin Parker the fat spiderman .

7mth
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KamBroFam123ERT
KamBroFam123ERTAuthor

And he got his powers back a couple of chapters later. If the Mc keeps on powering through every single villian then what is the point of it all. I have to keep saying it to everyone but here I go again If I want to create conflict then I'll have to make some changes here and there, I hate that trope too that is why I am trying my best to make the conflicts not last long. The only reason Peter got hurt in the Warmonger fight is because Iron man couldn't fire a unibeam.

Sid_Nite:He got pretty roughed in fight with warmonger , lost his powers and got cancer . he is shame to the spider-man community even more than Peter Benjamin Parker the fat spiderman .
7mth
Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

not really a problem with mc getting beaten up but not to point he suddenly gets cancer out of nowhere and lost his power just after major villain fight. even though he got his power back .

KamBroFam123ERT:And he got his powers back a couple of chapters later. If the Mc keeps on powering through every single villian then what is the point of it all. I have to keep saying it to everyone but here I go again If I want to create conflict then I'll have to make some changes here and there, I hate that trope too that is why I am trying my best to make the conflicts not last long. The only reason Peter got hurt in the Warmonger fight is because Iron man couldn't fire a unibeam.
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Shedrien
ShedrienLv3

I'm right at chapter 63. Honestly, taking away his powers was a dirty move, I won't lie. Plus, it gets to a point where we don't even know where the story is headed. I mean, apparently Peter makes plans, but we only find out about them once everything is happening and they tell us he planned it off-screen. The author said it's because it would be boring to know the plans before they happen, but to me, it's just lazy writing. We are literally living day by day with the events, waiting to see what the MC comes up with.

Sid_Nite:not really a problem with mc getting beaten up but not to point he suddenly gets cancer out of nowhere and lost his power just after major villain fight. even though he got his power back .
5mth
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Anshuman_Nirwan_0743
Anshuman_Nirwan_0743Lv4

it is a good fanfiction but I think spiderman of author alienwarlord is the best and strongest(will be I guess)

1yr

LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

So basically mc gets rencanted into Spider-Man then he decides to make a YouTube video and it gets 2 mill in one day even though it’s his first when we know that’s not realistically possible, he then find Billie elish running on top of buildings with 2 kids he decided to join them cuz of a feeling and then jumps some building gets recorded somehow. He gets grounded cuz why would he not when you find out your nephew hangs out with thieves and say you can hang with anymore, mc has a hissy fit and runs off then Ben goes out to find him. Ben gets on a bus with a 13? Year old girl and the girl is srounded by men, Ben does a 1v5 gets shot or stabbed, meanwhile mc stayed watching the stars for 20 mins then remembered he Spider-Man so rushes to find a mask and save Ben, the 13 year old was a YouTuber alone on a bus at night and recorded mc fighting the thugs. Mc somehow always gets recorded doing stuff cuz of plot idk? And then gets in trouble then he hissy fit then beats people while also being recorded. Not that good I normally read till chapter 15 to make a review and I’m at 15.

6mth
Kittyperfect
KittyperfectLv14

R.I.P to the author please send flowers the author due to failing grades

1yr
KamBroFam123ERT
KamBroFam123ERTAuthor

Mandatory authors 5 star review. Your comments are what make me want to write so be sure to comment, i don't need powerstones and i don't know what to do with them anyway. Please be gentle it's my 3rd first time writing a book.

1yr
Enter_Tainment
Enter_TainmentLv4

started of great but went downhill later on.

6mth
Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

I think this fic is good . the beginning was intriguing and I quite liked the concept the way it was written , didn't like the romance part that much as that was pretty gray area of fic . as author took an big break to upload the later chaps became very confusing as I couldn't understand what is happening , will reread from start when this fic hits more than 80 chaps as It would take good amount of time to go into the depth of this story.

10mth
Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

definately a good fic and waiting for more chapters

1yr
Eternal_Dragon_God
Eternal_Dragon_GodLv4

heh!🗿you have uploaded 69 chapters congratulations nothing more to say, haven't read the story

8mth
RayPrime
RayPrimeLv4

dude this is such a good fic, don't abandon it like the way u go into detail about the youtube video n all please add more of it

1yr
LootofMoney
LootofMoneyLv5

it's good overall only a bit jumping around but still understandable personality I like it the things I don't like it's a bit rushed like pitter being chased by destiny and telling himself fine I'm fine but no matter what problem caching up or like Thanos says I'm inevitable

7mth
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