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2024-04-26 20:22

Here's my third review for the fic . the fic was good in early stages and kept fluctuating in between i.e it had some good thing and some cringe things , but now has gone downhill from chap 63 . spoiler in reply.

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Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

He got pretty roughed in fight with warmonger , lost his powers and got cancer . he is shame to the spider-man community even more than Peter Benjamin Parker the fat spiderman .

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And he got his powers back a couple of chapters later. If the Mc keeps on powering through every single villian then what is the point of it all. I have to keep saying it to everyone but here I go again If I want to create conflict then I'll have to make some changes here and there, I hate that trope too that is why I am trying my best to make the conflicts not last long. The only reason Peter got hurt in the Warmonger fight is because Iron man couldn't fire a unibeam.

Sid_Nite:He got pretty roughed in fight with warmonger , lost his powers and got cancer . he is shame to the spider-man community even more than Peter Benjamin Parker the fat spiderman .
Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

not really a problem with mc getting beaten up but not to point he suddenly gets cancer out of nowhere and lost his power just after major villain fight. even though he got his power back .

KamBroFam123ERT:And he got his powers back a couple of chapters later. If the Mc keeps on powering through every single villian then what is the point of it all. I have to keep saying it to everyone but here I go again If I want to create conflict then I'll have to make some changes here and there, I hate that trope too that is why I am trying my best to make the conflicts not last long. The only reason Peter got hurt in the Warmonger fight is because Iron man couldn't fire a unibeam.
Shedrien
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I'm right at chapter 63. Honestly, taking away his powers was a dirty move, I won't lie. Plus, it gets to a point where we don't even know where the story is headed. I mean, apparently Peter makes plans, but we only find out about them once everything is happening and they tell us he planned it off-screen. The author said it's because it would be boring to know the plans before they happen, but to me, it's just lazy writing. We are literally living day by day with the events, waiting to see what the MC comes up with.

Sid_Nite:not really a problem with mc getting beaten up but not to point he suddenly gets cancer out of nowhere and lost his power just after major villain fight. even though he got his power back .
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