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Sangre60Tenibris
Sangre60TenibrisLv48mth
2024-03-30 08:26

The story is good, the writing is good, but the MC is very sensitive and immature or I think the author makes the MC's personality very incongruent Examples: At first the MC makes a plan to earn money, but he doesn't say anything about missing his parents and missing his parents gives him a panic attack (that had to happen in chapter 1 not after) Another example, the MC had an argument with his uncles (parents) for helping some street children and he ran away from home because of that. He also looked for his uncle Ben after 20 minutes to remember the canon of his Death HE SAW HIS UNCLE LEAVING AND THINKS HE'S IN DANGER AFTER SEEING THAT HE WENT TO LOOK FOR HIM AND WAITED FOR 20 MINUTES, BUT HE WAS ALSO LOOKING FOR SOMETHING FOR A COSTUME SO HE WON'T RECOGNIZE HIM

Friendly Neighborhood Youtuber Spider-man

KamBroFam123ERT
4.3
115 Chs

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tom_inan
tom_inanLv2

That's what makes it infuriating.. even after having future knowledge he acts soo immature and clueless. I mean he could easily earn money my patenting a few tech a bit advance then what there is or even some variant of spider silk and clothing materials or something. He feels more like low intelligent hero then as he was supposed to be, one of the most intelligent in Marvel ..

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KamBroFam123ERT
KamBroFam123ERTAuthor

Knowing one future is different from knowing all. You want him to make technology and patent it to earn money, he didn't have the starting capital for it and once he earned that he realised he wasn't in a hurry at least not until something major comes up. Making a company or product and selling it is a big thing for any teenager to do, it would be hard, you'll face resistance and it won't be done overnight. Any capital he earned has been put into buying a safe bet like the Stark shares which he knows will rise.

tom_inan:That's what makes it infuriating.. even after having future knowledge he acts soo immature and clueless. I mean he could easily earn money my patenting a few tech a bit advance then what there is or even some variant of spider silk and clothing materials or something. He feels more like low intelligent hero then as he was supposed to be, one of the most intelligent in Marvel ..
8mth
tom_inan
tom_inanLv2

You are correct in that he can't easily sell or creat a company as a teenager , but he could at at least fix his life how it's going.. I mean he almost got killed cz of a simple reason he didn't use his brain to think who might be after him. Also he is indecisive about everything bout his life . At least he knows one of the future and he could prepare or make plans bout that .also he could just graduate from highschool.. why tf does he needs to be in highschool 😕😕

KamBroFam123ERT:Knowing one future is different from knowing all. You want him to make technology and patent it to earn money, he didn't have the starting capital for it and once he earned that he realised he wasn't in a hurry at least not until something major comes up. Making a company or product and selling it is a big thing for any teenager to do, it would be hard, you'll face resistance and it won't be done overnight. Any capital he earned has been put into buying a safe bet like the Stark shares which he knows will rise.
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Anshuman_Nirwan_0743
Anshuman_Nirwan_0743Lv4

it is a good fanfiction but I think spiderman of author alienwarlord is the best and strongest(will be I guess)

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LT_Ryuu_X
LT_Ryuu_XLv4

So basically mc gets rencanted into Spider-Man then he decides to make a YouTube video and it gets 2 mill in one day even though it’s his first when we know that’s not realistically possible, he then find Billie elish running on top of buildings with 2 kids he decided to join them cuz of a feeling and then jumps some building gets recorded somehow. He gets grounded cuz why would he not when you find out your nephew hangs out with thieves and say you can hang with anymore, mc has a hissy fit and runs off then Ben goes out to find him. Ben gets on a bus with a 13? Year old girl and the girl is srounded by men, Ben does a 1v5 gets shot or stabbed, meanwhile mc stayed watching the stars for 20 mins then remembered he Spider-Man so rushes to find a mask and save Ben, the 13 year old was a YouTuber alone on a bus at night and recorded mc fighting the thugs. Mc somehow always gets recorded doing stuff cuz of plot idk? And then gets in trouble then he hissy fit then beats people while also being recorded. Not that good I normally read till chapter 15 to make a review and I’m at 15.

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Kittyperfect
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R.I.P to the author please send flowers the author due to failing grades

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KamBroFam123ERT
KamBroFam123ERTAuthor

Mandatory authors 5 star review. Your comments are what make me want to write so be sure to comment, i don't need powerstones and i don't know what to do with them anyway. Please be gentle it's my 3rd first time writing a book.

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Enter_Tainment
Enter_TainmentLv4

started of great but went downhill later on.

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Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

I think this fic is good . the beginning was intriguing and I quite liked the concept the way it was written , didn't like the romance part that much as that was pretty gray area of fic . as author took an big break to upload the later chaps became very confusing as I couldn't understand what is happening , will reread from start when this fic hits more than 80 chaps as It would take good amount of time to go into the depth of this story.

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Sid_Nite
Sid_NiteLv4

definately a good fic and waiting for more chapters

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Eternal_Dragon_God
Eternal_Dragon_GodLv4

heh!🗿you have uploaded 69 chapters congratulations nothing more to say, haven't read the story

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RayPrime
RayPrimeLv4

dude this is such a good fic, don't abandon it like the way u go into detail about the youtube video n all please add more of it

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LootofMoney
LootofMoneyLv5

it's good overall only a bit jumping around but still understandable personality I like it the things I don't like it's a bit rushed like pitter being chased by destiny and telling himself fine I'm fine but no matter what problem caching up or like Thanos says I'm inevitable

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