I tried, I really did, because the story seemed interesting.. But the language really is just painful to read (And I am a guy who regularly reads MTL without any complaints). It honestly feels like it's written by some AI which was given the command: "Make it sound as flowery/fanciful as possible". I could still barely tolerate it if that tone was only used for the narration, but even all the characters speak like that. And this also makes it hard to even put a pin to the personality of the characters. NO ONE in real life speaks like that. And even in the TV show no one spoke like that. Elijah sounds the closest...but he was definitely not so cringey!!
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