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Kevin_Harper_1476
Kevin_Harper_1476Lv111yr
2023-07-27 15:24

Reviewed as of chapter 12: The world building is plentiful. It’s diverse and the world feels real. The gods and groups in it dont feel so carelessly made up. great start. Grammatically it’s nearly impeccable. One small error in 12 chaps. The words flow well and I’m honestly entranced by the authors wide vocabulary. Updating stability is great. Nothing else needs to be said. Story dev is pretty good but feels sorta rushed. Could be my fault as the reader but I feel like more should be let on as to why our Mc was sought out by this demon lord. It all feels a little rushed. We also haven’t been told what he’s supposed to do as the choosen one of his new dark god. Character development Is great but designe is sorta lacklustre. Perhaps I missed it but do not know hair colour, body shape, or eye colour yet. Once again I may have missed it. Overall great read. Worth the time to get through it all. Can’t wait to read more!

Heretic Mage: Rise of the Dark God’s Necromancer

Lolbroman25
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201 Chs

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You can find the description of the MC in the fiftfh-ish paragraph of the first chapter. As for being a chosen of the Dark Gods, it's mostly like a bookmark.The Dark God found Morne interesting, so He marked him so He could check back whenever He wants. It doesn't come with any inherent advantages besides a bit of clout from His followers, and as for the disadvantages, well, I get to that later :).Thanks for the review!

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Kevin_Harper_1476
Kevin_Harper_1476Lv11

Ah okay my bad then. Great job btw it’s really of a quality rarely seen on WEBNOVEL.

Lolbroman25:You can find the description of the MC in the fiftfh-ish paragraph of the first chapter. As for being a chosen of the Dark Gods, it's mostly like a bookmark.The Dark God found Morne interesting, so He marked him so He could check back whenever He wants. It doesn't come with any inherent advantages besides a bit of clout from His followers, and as for the disadvantages, well, I get to that later :).Thanks for the review!
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