Read up to ch 4, The grammar is fine, there are times I can't tell who is talking but overall it's fine. From what I get is that this story is about hunters like solo leveling. In the first chapter, in my opinion, the author should only include the stats of the MC, not the side characters since at this point we do not care about side characters and it just adds more clutter to the chapter. I think it's best to reveal the side character's stats later in the chapters when there is more content to introduce them. There is not much to go on with, but overall i had a fun time with it.
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