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Zefyr
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2023-03-28 20:53

Okay so i must say it got me hooked on , or now i bookmarked it and i hope you post a few more chapters so i have something to read xD. I observed a tiny mistake where you said his landlord threw him on the streets for not paying rent, but then you said he run from home 4 days ago , maybe you'll change that. All in all i think it's a pretty good story.

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MichaelYong
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This novel explores the compelling story of George Dickman, a young man who is far from ordinary due to his ability to turn any living thing to dust with just one touch. After a dispute with his father, George finds himself homeless and wandering the streets of the City of Bonaville. It is here that he meets Diego, a graveyard resident, and together they embark on an adventure. The journey is not an easy one, and in order to achieve their goals, the duo must first acquire graveyard residency, a feat that proves to be quite challenging. Along the way, George finds himself in dire situations, such as being tied to an altar and facing a cult of ancient tomb worshippers. The author does a fantastic job of creating a vivid and engaging world filled with unique and fascinating characters. George is a relatable protagonist, and readers will find themselves rooting for him as he navigates the challenges that come his way. The addition of magical elements adds depth and intrigue to the story, and the inclusion of various supernatural creatures keeps the plot fresh and exciting. The writing style is fluid and descriptive, immersing the reader in the story and keeping them engaged until the very end. The dialogue is natural and believable, and the pacing of the plot is well-executed, with a perfect balance between action-packed scenes and moments of reflection. Overall, this novel is an excellent example of the fantasy genre, with a well-crafted plot, compelling characters, and a captivating world. Fans of adventure and magic will find themselves thoroughly engrossed in the story, making this novel a must-read for anyone who loves a good adventure.

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