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Someone_Or_Other
Someone_Or_OtherLv1511mthSomeone_Or_Other

Writing quality: fair. There are noticeable mistakes, but they don’t take away from the story. Updating stability: abysmal. If you go into this expecting to hit the 8 chapters per week release rate, prepare for disappointment. Story development: solid. While the “villaintagonist” isn’t very genre-savvy, the story works. It’s obvious that the author put a lot of effort into his plotting and prewriting, rather than simply writing by the seat of their pants. Character design: outstanding. The story may fit into a neatly designed box, with all of the tropes and archetypes you expect, that trope and archetype usage is intentional and borderline satirical. What sets it apart is the actually intelligent MC, which is always a pleasant surprise since most of the MCs I see would lose in an IQ contest against a box of not-particularly-bright rocks. World background: bog standard. The world is modern-day China, so expect the standard world that you see in pretty much every modern-day novel. Overall: the lack of regular updates really hurts this novel. It’s good enough that I really want to read more, to the point wheee I’m considering paying for privilege, but the lack of updates would make that pointless. After all, the difference between waiting for chapter 79 and waiting for chapter 109 is virtually nothing, except waiting for chapter 109 will cost me quite a lot of money since privilege may run out and need to be repurchased before the new chapter is released.

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As a Villain in the Fictional World

HarukiSensei

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HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthorHarukiSensei

No harem but you can say that he uses 3 women for now.

ZARIUS:Ay mate question for you, how many harem members are you planning to add ?
HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthorHarukiSensei

Sorry for that. I will begin editing and writing more chapters constantly from tomorrow.

Someone_Or_Other
Someone_Or_OtherLv15Someone_Or_Other

Thanks for responding! I try to always give unbiased, detailed, and in-depth reviews on books I read when I either catch up to the current (non-privilege) chapter or make the decision to drop them. I hope my feedback helps:}

HarukiSensei:Sorry for that. I will begin editing and writing more chapters constantly from tomorrow.
HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthorHarukiSensei

That's what I want to.

ZARIUS
ZARIUSLv4ZARIUS

Ay mate question for you, how many harem members are you planning to add ?

HarukiSensei:That's what I want to.
ZARIUS
ZARIUSLv4ZARIUS

You mean there won't be a harem in the end or he won't be in a relationship in the current chapters?

HarukiSensei:No harem but you can say that he uses 3 women for now.
HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthorHarukiSensei

He is in relationship but not romantically for now. I'll add harem later.

ZARIUS:You mean there won't be a harem in the end or he won't be in a relationship in the current chapters?
ZARA002
ZARA002Lv2ZARA002

When you are planning for that? i want LEMONS, and 3 are too little at least make it 7

HarukiSensei:He is in relationship but not romantically for now. I'll add harem later.