webnovel
Spic1503
Spic1503Lv1510mth
2024-05-28 01:46

Title of the book can be misleading. MC isnt building an Empire, he is barely building a city. The city is being build in the background without us knowing which I find terrible. Where the city building chapters or empire building??? Why the hell would he chill in other cities except the one hes building. It had a great start but everything went downhill when you stop focusing on character development and empire building development. I think the title is clickbait and false. Get back to empire/city building and focusing on leveing his city to see his GF from the start again

Liked by 9 people

LIKE
Replies4
DaoistpjUWEL
DaoistpjUWELAuthor

Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.

Spic1503
Spic1503Lv15

I understand, i guess i’m just disappointed since I was expecting a kingdom building/city building genre with the title. Since it only an OP caracter fighting non stop everywhere and he abandoned his city I wont be spending coins anymore since its not my style. i would just like to give my opinion. Since this is your novel, stick to your plan and whay you want to create, doesnt mean thay someone didnt like it that someone else wont. Just like what your original readers didnt like, i liked. What I like, they dislike. I found the first 75 chapters to be the best and wished you would of stayed the same 🥲

DaoistpjUWEL:Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.
Ahupnatun
AhupnatunLv13

That really saddens me the people clamoring for over powered mc's from the beginning. It's fine from time to time, but I feel like it cheapens the character so much. It also tends to make any side character in the story be completely obsolete. I want to see the mc struggle a lot and barely make it through challenges to get his powerups. Not just a random roll of good luck and get all SSS grade talents or skills in the first 5 chapters.

DaoistpjUWEL:Thank you for your candid feedback; indeed, that is the case. However, I would like to clarify the reason. When this novel was first created, some readers provided feedback that they did not like seeing a weak MC; they wanted to see a strong MC fighting enemies. Therefore, I shifted the focus of my writing. Now, at 300 chapters, it is difficult for me to redirect the focus back to empire building. But I assure you, in the upcoming chapters, I will make sure that Laura returns. Since Laura's combat power is at T0, I will reintroduce her in a different way.
pothos
pothosLv14

Thanks for the review. I like kingdom building. I have been having a hard time finding something I really like lately because there is an outcry of support for op. Which just isn’t my cup of tea. I guess back to the good old library

Other Reviews
Money_King_MM
Money_King_MMLv14
Related Stories

Primordial Villain with a Slave Harem

Quinlan, a simple office worker finds himself transmigrated to an extremely dangerous fantasy land as a level 1 Commoner with nothing to his name but his wits - and a unique gift that accompanied his teleportation. No one in Thalorind could have predicted that this unassuming arrival would one day rise to the top, redefining the very meaning of the term 'power'... And that he may have achieved said result by joining a criminal organization and clawing his way through its ranks. In the beginning, Quinlan was painfully weak and alone but thanks to his severe trust issues, joining a team was... hard. However, he soon noticed that a lot of people have collars around their necks in this world... People that couldn't exactly betray him. Follow Quinlan's journey as he grows in strength, amasses wealth, fights to the death, and meets lovely ladies. ... Discord: https://discord.gg/bjunEkswQ3 ... Disclaimer: I'd received a few complaints from some readers that my MC is not a real villain, and I have to agree; if you're looking for some complete psycho MC who burns random farmer villages down just for fun then don't read. The MC is a ruthless man who does evil things from time to time, but only to his enemies or those he considers to be true scum. He gains no joy from tormenting strangers. Also don't read if you want a story about buying s*x slaves and r*ping them, that doesn't happen in this novel. He will treat the women he wants to be with as if they were normal people, whether they're slaves or not.

NecroBin · Fantasy
4.5
712 Chs

The Runic Alchemist

Ben, a postgraduate chemistry student, envisions a future where science unlocks the secrets of the universe. But fate has other plans. In a sudden twist, Ben dies and awakens in a strange new world, reborn as a five-year-old boy named Damian Sunblade. Damian's joy at being part of a noble family is short-lived. His family, valuing gold over blood, sells him off to another noble house to be groomed as a homemaker husband, a mere pawn in their political games. Struggling with his new reality and the remnants of his past life’s knowledge, Damian refuses to succumb to his fate. In his new household, Damian discovers that this world is governed by magic circles, Runic symbols wielding immense power. Driven by his scientific curiosity, Damian begins to experiment. Applying the laws of physics to the Rune symbols, he deciphers their secrets and invents his own unique form of magic. However, The family that bought him has their own plans for him, seeing Damian as a valuable tool to enhance their power. But Damian, ever the independent spirit, has dreams beyond servitude. He longs for freedom, a place to call his own—a life where he can use his talents without restraint. And so Damian devises a daring plan to escape. His journey is fraught with danger and intrigue, as he navigates a world filled with mystical creatures, powerful adversaries, and ancient secrets. Along the way, he forges alliances and battles enemies, all while refining his magical and scientific skills. In "The Runic Alchemist," follow Damian Sunblade’s epic quest for independence and self-discovery. Witness his transformation from a forsaken child to a formidable Alchemist, determined to carve out an extraordinary future for himself in a world teeming with infinite possibilities. ***** Author Note : Hello! GlaringError here! As I have already mentioned in my author review I am restating it here since I am getting tons of comments about it, that I am more of a reader myself than a writer, I made this novel in an attempt to capture my fantasy world residing in my mind into words.. Writing is new for me.. The premise of my novel is inspired by many great works that I have loved over the years. And some elements I have in my novel that are slightly similar to them but it's just the skeleton of it, the real meat of the plot is entirely my own cooking. Some of the influence that is more noticeable is from The Runesmith (By Kuropon), The King's Avatar (By Butterfly Blue) and Shadow Slave (By Guiltythree). I have immense respect for these legends and I can only hope to follow in their footsteps. To all those who comment just by judging the name, at least give it a chance before letting your opinions be known. Thank you.

GlaringError · Fantasy
4.4
557 Chs