Review Detail of Darkman90 in Classroom of the Elite: The Eroge
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I really wanted to like this story, I really did. I finally thought I found a good COTE fan fic, but man this story is getting on my nerves on almost every single chapter with how annoying the things are playing out and how forceful the story feels. The MC is a literal slave to the system, like no question about it. I feel like even black people have more freedom in US(from the civil war era) than the MC does. And because of this the story feels very forceful and predictable. I am going to pause reading for now, and in this future if it gets better I will come back to it. Good luck though.
Classroom of the Elite: The Eroge
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lazyvampiredemonas:That is true the mc is kinda a slave to the system but honestly the system doesn’t really matter much if you just focus on the interaction. The story doesn’t really revolve around the later parts as it only acts as the absurdity and plot device of the rest of the chapters. That being said at the start it does revolve around the system but in later parts it at least tuned down. Though mind control is still part of it so if you don’t like heavenly powers being annoying then this story isn’t really for you
That is true the mc is kinda a slave to the system but honestly the system doesn’t really matter much if you just focus on the interaction. The story doesn’t really revolve around the later parts as it only acts as the absurdity and plot device of the rest of the chapters. That being said at the start it does revolve around the system but in later parts it at least tuned down. Though mind control is still part of it so if you don’t like heavenly powers being annoying then this story isn’t really for you
Yes the system interface does pop out less as we go along in the story. But the thing is his mentality is totally a slave towards the system. He judges, decides and moves based on his skill(or should I say system) interfering with his life. Like the system doesn’t need to pop out for the readers to not notice that he makes a decision because he is afraid the system is going to interfere, thus the slave mentality towards the system. I feel like I haven’t seen much of his own personal freedom when it comes to his decision or choices. I don’t hate “divine intervention” and stuff but a story needs to have the mc be independent of at least making critical decisions or else it feels forced and out of hand.
lazyvampiredemonas:That is true the mc is kinda a slave to the system but honestly the system doesn’t really matter much if you just focus on the interaction. The story doesn’t really revolve around the later parts as it only acts as the absurdity and plot device of the rest of the chapters. That being said at the start it does revolve around the system but in later parts it at least tuned down. Though mind control is still part of it so if you don’t like heavenly powers being annoying then this story isn’t really for you
Konrad_The_Fourth:Does the fanfic have lemon? If it does is it skippable?