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The_PriestLv31yr
2023-03-25 23:39

Pretty cool story. My biggest issue with it are the grammatical errors. It's not unreadable by any means but it's enough to be distracting from the story. If those didn't exist or got ironed out, it'd be closer to a 5.

Immortals of the Hidden Sect

Renaichi
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Thank you for your feedback, english is my third language so I'm struggling with grammars sometimes. I want to try using some grammar check apps, but I don't know whether it will work well or not.

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Pendulum_
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Please give mine a try Name: Reincarnation of the Cross

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one of the only story that have piqued my interest in the last 3-4weeks in webnovel and that is to say for a good reason

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Hope you can continue this! I really like what you have so far!

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Your novel and plotline is interesting enough to catch my attention among other ero novels in the new section,i hope you will not lose motivation and drop this novel as i can see it has a lot of potential for you to squeeze.

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