Review Detail of DaoOfCulture in A Legacy Continued

I am really enjoying this FF. It explores the story line of the HP world and smoothly conveys his(the author's) ideas. The grammar is good, story development is intriguing, and the author seems to keep his update rate stable. If I have any extra comments, it would be to skip the synopsis chapter. Personally, it just made me wonder why it was even there, and the repetition of "the protagonist" made me want to burn my eyes out. Basically, just don't read the synopsis chapter and go to the prologue. Besides that, wonderful FF and I look forward to more chaps