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alu_sachi
alu_sachiLv121yr
2023-03-21 02:37

The book has unlimited potential. can't stop reading

OUR DIARY

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Tribal_Ink
Tribal_InkLv1

Every chapters are very engaging, and you can feel the emotions of every characters. 👍👍 waiting for more chapters🥰

1yr

obiparadise_purity
obiparadise_purityLv12

The book is a good one, lessons to be learnt. I hope they find out who the killer is. Can't say much for now but will continue to read. Thumbs up author.

1yr
vorlefan
vorlefanLv3

This has a nice idea to be developed! It gives you the vibe of: "I know that you did in the last summer". Few chapters, so I don't have much else to comment about. Things to improve: Grammar: It has grammatical issues that sometimes break the flow and readability. Suggestion: Listen up to channels like 'Southern Cannibal' and 'Let's Read', they have some amazing school stories. It will give you inspirations to develop the plot. Keep the good work :)

1yr
K_Thurah_2671
K_Thurah_2671Lv1

Synopsis got me hooked. Nice one, author!

1yr
Medallionzz
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Reveal spoiler

1yr
TranslatorKun
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To be honest I am not a fan of this genre. However, this novel I feel gets more interesting progressively. I found the first 2-3 chapters okayish but liked the later chapters.

1yr
AAKASH_KATIYAR
AAKASH_KATIYARLv1

To be honest I am not a fan of this genre. However, this novel I feel gets more interesting progressively. I found the first 2-3 chapters okayish but liked the later chapters.

1yr
LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3

The opening chapter introduces the main characters and their world, along with some intriguing elements such as secrets and fear. It has also set the tone for the story, creating a sense of mystery and suspense that will encourage readers to continue reading. If I had to give advice to the author, I would suggest that they continue to develop the characters and their relationships to create a more compelling and relatable story. Additionally, it would be helpful to clarify the main conflict of the story to give readers a clear idea of what to expect. Finally, the author should focus on maintaining a consistent and engaging writing style throughout the novel. Good Luck...

1yr
Marckaroni
MarckaroniLv3

Interesting premise with a good synopsis. I like how it is engaging with the reader and the pace is also really good. Writing quality is good and the grammar is consistent. I see the potential this novel has. Keep it up

1yr
SupremeDaoist2
SupremeDaoist2Lv3

This a nice novel it really reminds about the good times. All in all great storyline wonderful startup. I know it has great potential. Good luck author

1yr
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