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This is a comment mainly for the author. I feel like the villain element is lacking as you say that this book will not lack villain atribute but a true villain would do things not even the devil would do athe main character in your book is held back by your morals as you let them be free for the most part but I cannot say that the main character is a true villain. I do have to aploud you 👏👏👏as you are doing a better job at displaying a villain like character than all the novel writer I have seen. You have not beat them by a small margin you bet them by a league. So this is a good novel but it just falls short of some of the expectations I have for the villain.

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Manipulative Harem God

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I am just trying to capture a bit larger audience base. If I write a MC without morals completely it would have a very niche audience base. So don't think MC is held back by my morals, maybe you haven't checked my other novel (The Psychopath harem), this is why saying something like this. The author doesn't have any morals to begin with.

Blood_Fang
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oh but do you, I will look at your other novel and find out if that is true (don't fail me.)

SKuLL:I am just trying to capture a bit larger audience base. If I write a MC without morals completely it would have a very niche audience base. So don't think MC is held back by my morals, maybe you haven't checked my other novel (The Psychopath harem), this is why saying something like this. The author doesn't have any morals to begin with.