Review Detail of Lotus_8171 in Fate / Lost Avian (anime multiverse)
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I'm in the process of editing the summary of the novel. Currently I need some suggestions to improve the quality for readers, so I hope you can give me some comments so I can edit, thank you.
Psan:Can you be more specific? The summary dosnt tells you much, whats MST? I know its fate related due to servants. But im lost in everything else. Does he has a homeworld of he just jumps from one verse to another? Do the girls and companions follow him? Also. The MC's Name is hard to remember. How do you even pronounce it?
Can you be more specific? The summary dosnt tells you much, whats MST? I know its fate related due to servants. But im lost in everything else. Does he has a homeworld of he just jumps from one verse to another? Do the girls and companions follow him? Also. The MC's Name is hard to remember. How do you even pronounce it?
Thank you for your feedback. I will edit the summary of the story to make it clearer. If you have any suggestions to help me, I hope you will support and give me feedback to help me improve, thank you.
Psan:You want to fix your novel summary... Its not good at all, i believe this is the main reason nobody reads it. They wont know what makes it unique and why should they read it
then i seriouly recommend you read the "book of authors" here in WN... if ignore the chïnêşë propâğanda to work like a slave. its really really good. it explains the very basics of how to write a story. its way better than going nâķêd at writing
Lotus_8171:I'm in the process of editing the summary of the novel. Currently I need some suggestions to improve the quality for readers, so I hope you can give me some comments so I can edit, thank you.