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2023-10-22 04:24

much better than I anticipated. there were early red flags about the character, in particular i was worried that it would be a simp developing confidence type of character arc, but that concern was unfoynded. protaganist doesn't play the get manipulated by the female leads game, or follow the pace of the original game he is pulled into. he has his own thoughts, and though he has his character flaws, all well developed characters do. unique enough world building. seems to be a weak to strong, but instead of playing the pig to eat the tiger, it is more like the reverse. mc puts on a tough unbeatable persona despite not having a significant advantage yet. there is a bit too much focus on how "average" he looks, as that shouldn't really be something that stands out.

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