I'm writing this review on the previous version, i loved it as it was and can't wait to see what you do with this rewrite hope to see more chapters very soon.
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Hay Yuri dentro del Harem?
No.
DruggedCookie:Hay Yuri dentro del Harem?
Thanks for answering, there are authors who don't answer and you have to risk reading it, I'll give it a try đ
DracoKnight:No.
Hi, DracoKnight here, I am a newbie author, so you might find some mistakes in the story, if you are okay with it, please give it a try. If you are looking for an OP MC with no moral compass then this novel is not for you. MC has his own set of moral codes and strictly follows them, although he will be forced to break them from time to time, he will not turn into a murderhobo. I don't know what more to say about this story, read it for yourself and see if it's to your liking. As for this five stars review, I am shameless enough to give myself five stars. That's it, there is no special reason for it. Thank you:) P.S: If you have any questions regarding this story, you can ask here, I will answer them as long as it doesn't involve a spoiler.
Well here is where I get off this novel, it started off very well quiet the mc very nice the waifus too, their interactions were very good, a nice novel to pass the day, until the end of volume 1, a drama never seen before in this novels was added, it was just a boom, we have the quiet and stingy mc spending his life well with his waifus, and pam, he fights with the whole empire, almost kills the emperor, that all that would have been great at least, but all ended up in nothing all that for nothing, his fiancée who is the princess simply defended her father and decided to stay in the empire (I liked the waifu but meh since I don't care about her existence) I understand her but it's boring and tedious to watch it as a viewer, hundreds of chapters are coming without her, until suddenly she comes back and you say, oh she's back great (with a lot of drama in between), the author says he will give her chapters to see how she is, but the truth is that I'm not very interested, so this is the end of this novel for me, too much drama was added and I've seen so much of this kind of plot that it's boring, so good luck author
Great novel the Mc is overpowered but still has the urge the grow stronger.The world background is well built and slowly unfolding.
Don't waste your time searching you've found a Masterpiece.Read in moderation it can cause addiction.
The previous novel was great. This one is also going very well , except that the story now feels more long and complicated (which is good, who doesn't like long novels with good stories?).. hope you give a good ending to the story . AND PLEASE DON'T DROP THE STORY IN THE MIDDLE .
its boring tbh, like not good but not bad either,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Hi DracoKnight when is the hiatus ending. Please continue to upload chapters.
Very well written with hardly any typos/grammatical errors. MC can seem a little dopey at times but overall pretty badarse. FMCs have their own quirks which has them stand out quite well from each other. good read
This novel is an enjoyable read, well written and while he doesnt add harem members willy nilly, doesnt skimp on the or the lemons, so far as of around chappie 118 there are 3 confirmed members and 2 potentials ( one he has met and one he has yet too ) all in all, extremely worth a read, especially since currently it is free to read, though i would pay for it, its nice to not have too.
With the rising tide of steam power and machinery, who can come close to being a Beyonder? Shrouded in the fog of history and darkness, who or what is the lurking evil that murmurs into our ears? Waking up to be faced with a string of mysteries, Zhou Mingrui finds himself reincarnated as Klein Moretti in an alternate Victorian era world where he sees a world filled with machinery, cannons, dreadnoughts, airships, difference machines, as well as Potions, Divination, Hexes, Tarot Cards, Sealed Artifacts⊠The Light continues to shine but mystery has never gone far. Follow Klein as he finds himself entangled with the Churches of the worldâboth orthodox and unorthodoxâwhile he slowly develops newfound powers thanks to the Beyonder potions. Like the corresponding tarot card, The Fool, which is numbered 0âa number of unlimited potentialâthis is the legend of "The Fool."
'Divinity Online'. The new breakthrough in the Full-Immersion Virtual Reality technology. After decades of work, Divinity Corp had achieved the impossible. Creating a massive video game world that people can enter and live in as if it were Earth. Their goal was clear, to create a world other than Earth that we can call home. A place where the laws of reality vanish, and the true ceiling of power shifts completely. Naturally, the shockwave Divinity Online created across the entire globe was unlike anything else. Every single person has heard of it, even those who have had no interest in video games before. Giant corporations and even governments immediately rushed to start planning to invest in this new world and just like that, billions of people had their eyes on one single date: the 19th of July. *** Arthur, like everyone else, had heard of the game and was as excited as everyone else to try it, if not even more. With how much he grew bored of his life on earth, this fantasy world was like the divine call he had been searching for. However, there was a very small problem. He had no money to buy the machine required to access Divinity Online. His wretched life had turned him into a broke teenager with no parents, and no relatives. But, by some kind of luck, he got his hands on one of those machines. Not knowing what was awaiting him in that world, Arthur was simply seeking one thing... A new opportunity in life and to find a purpose he could work for when he had none so far. [Welcome to 'Divinity Online'.] [Assimilation Started...]
Just try it, i'm sure you will love it :). Update Daily at around 9 AM PST ------------------------- âWait a minute⊠why does this truck have no driver-â An average man was hit by two trucks and was suddenly reincarnated in another world with the help of Rher, the God of Fate; but it seemed like this new world he was in had magic, classes, and even a very game-like approach to it? Your class is decided at your birth with no way to change or choose it, and yet here he was, with the [Chosen One] talent and the [Class Wheel] skill, which allowed him to spin the wheel to gain a class every time. And so the first time he spanned the wheel during a fight... "What the fuck is the SSS-ranked 'Domination' class? Never heard of it!" Follow the story of Stark as he faces all the challenges of this world and tries to survive everything and anything that comes at him. ------------------------- WSA 2024 ENTRY! Please show support and gift powerstones if you like the story! 150 Powerstones: 1 bonus chapter 250 Powerstones: 2 bonus chapters 500 Powerstones: 3 bonus chapters Thank you :)
On just another normal Monday, a new virtual reality game called "Evolution Online" launched out of nowhere and took the world by storm. People were blown away by the gameâs hyper-realistic features and endless adventures. Everyone from small companies to big corporations and governments scrambled to get a foothold on this mysterious video game. But what they didn't know was that this game was actually a tutorial for the upcoming apocalypse that was about to hit the planet! The game was a precursor to the Earth's first evolution, where mana was going to be unleashed into the real world! Liam, a high school student who had faced numerous setbacks in his life, turned to 'Evolution Online' in the hope of changing his fate, but instead, he got trapped in the game's twisted world, and things went from bad to worse. When the apocalypse finally arrived, Liam barely managed to escape, but his situation didn't improve. Along with millions of others, he died a miserable death, unable to fight back and filled with regret. However, Liam's story didn't end there. He found himself inexplicably transported back in time before everything started! Armed with the knowledge of what was to come, Liam was determined to become the strongest and most powerful player, unleashing destruction upon the world that had ruined him before! This time, things were going to be different! ******************* Discord Link for chatting with author and character art https://discord.gg/XS7gWScKn8
The legendary mana finally reached planet Earth, causing all living things to officially enter the path of evolution. Animals turned into terrifying beasts, some plants gained self-awareness, and humans who managed to withstand the wave of mana awakened the ability to acquire skills by defeating powerful enemies. The entire planet entered a new era where the old laws fell. The only law was the law of the jungle where the strongest devoured the weakest. Bai Zemin, an apparently normal college student, turned out to be an unparalleled genius in the path of magic. This caught the attention of a beautiful demoness who would become his partner in this journey to the absolute top. God, Angel, Demon, Dragon, Vampire, Werewolf; no existence will be worthy of being his enemy! Disclaimer: The 'Earth' in this novel is not the same Earth we are currently living on so do not use our common sense for this novel. This is pure fantasy, after all. *** Successes achieved: #Top 1 in sales for more than 1 year in a row. #Top 1 in Golden Tickets for 10 months in a row. #Among the top 25 in all the charts since its release. #Winner of 1st place in the most popular webnovel event in 2021. #Winner of a possibility of adaptation. *** Support me: pat reon.com/XIETIAN
Elric's life had been nothing short of a nightmare since his childhood. He was constantly bullied at school, detested and ignored by his family, and left with nobody to care whether he lived or died. The accumulated loneliness and suffering from decades pushed him into a severe depression, and he ultimately decided to take his lifeâs final decision⊠Suicide. One day, Elric's soul heard a voice calling out to him. "Wake up, Elric. I am the God of Darkness, and I'm here to give you another chance at life." To the God of Darkness, Elric replied with only two words⊠"Fuck off!" Now forced with the possibility of a new life despite his unwillingness⊠Elric must decide whether to become a puppet or forge a new destiny with his own hands. Will he overcome his traumatic past, or will he squander yet another chance at life? Join the Protagonist on his journey as he is given an impossible task while striving to become one of the strongest beings in a world full of Magic, Mythical creatures, Dragons, and Gods. ---------------- [[Author : The protagonist of this story is a scheming mastermind who doesn't trust anyone and plans everything based on his present strength, knowledge and circumstances. No Romance, Harem, or Fan-service here. The main character is also not an Edgelord or a Psychopath who kills people without reason. Character development is a gradual process as the Main Character learns to acknowledge and overcome his flaws. This is a story for those who appreciate a psychologically well-developed character. The protagonist is an Antihero character who exists in the gray area between good and evil. This is a story for those who enjoy complex characters, greatly improving and expanding World-building along with intricate plots. If you are looking for a story with a nuanced and morally ambiguous yet humorous protagonist in a mature and gritty world, then this is the novel for you.]] ---------------- Note : Character Reference Arts available in chapter comments. Discord Link : https://discord.gg/xR7vUzCYx9 ---------------- Note : Vote for the Novel for extra weekly chapters. 500 Power Stones = 1 Extra Chapter per week 1000 Power Stones = 2 Extra Chapters per week 2500 Power Stones = 5 Extra chapters per week 500 Golden Tickets = 2 Extra chapters per week 1000 Golden Tickets = 3 Extra chapters per week 1500 Golden Tickets = 7 Extra chapters per week
## The MC is Overpowered!! And So Broken!! Leon found a rare quest that led him to the Goddess of Sloth. She was amazed by his determination and made him her Divine Champion, giving him the powerful Self-Transcendence Blessing. Everything changed after that! The blessing unlocked the Legendary Blacksmith Class, letting him create weapons no one else could match. His skills kept growing, and there seemed to be no limits to his strength. As Leon's power and fame grew, he attracted the most powerfulâand beautifulâcharacters in the game, eventually building his own Guild and even founding a Kingdom! His success in the game also changed his real life, bringing him wealth and fame he never imagined. Yet, one question continued to haunt him: What is the secret behind this virtual world that feels so real? ** ### Discord Server: tinyurl.com/galanteodiscord ## Additional Tags: - Harem and Romance - No Yuri No NTR! - Blacksmith - Kingdom Building - Spirit Beast Contract - Real World Impact - Wealth and Fame - Seven Sins
Thousands of years ago, humankind left the Old World. We enter a new age where science and magic are no longer opposing concepts. With these new opportunities came danger in the form of the Dark Races and the ones that named themselves Gods. However, if there was one thing humans were good at was their ability to destroy. Humankind fought and carved a bloody path into the new world. Cain's luck had never been good, but his destiny changed forever once he decided to harden his heart and face the world without fear or hesitation. --Godslayer Humankind's motto.-- We can comprehend the supernatural. We can dominate the supernatural. We can kill the supernatural - Adam, Emperor of Godslayer Humankind, The First Titan. Current schedule: 21 chapters a week. Bonus chapters: Over 600 power stones: 3 extra chapters. Over 800 power stones: 6 extra chapters. Over 1200 power stones: 9 extra chapters. Discord channel: https://discord.gg/R666sNEdrU