SalmonFishLv42yr

2023-04-01 23:01

An enjoyable read which seems to both capture the characters involved and the appeal of a well organized novel; would enjoy more chapters, since the author has already impressed the story onto one of my most entertaining fanfics. On a criticism’s note, the only qualm I have is the lack of world building chapters, for the povs of naruto or other characters and how they are experiencing the story. Along with this note, I hope to see more slow paced and fleshed out chapters rather than the fast pace story the author is implementing, allowing the readers and myself to feel the world and the swordsmans effects on his environment. Either way, the story and quality are great. 10/10

Naruto: Miyamoto Musashi

Dung_Eater

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21 Chs