Review Detail of That_One_Dead_Ali in Reborn as a Dragon in a fantasy world: Picked up by a genius redheaded
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Shameless of me, I know. But I had to do this since I, for some reason, couldn't put these in the synopsis. Let me tell what you can expect in this story so you won't be wasting your time.1) This story is strictly a sole female lead book. No extra love interests will be added, and MC won't take any concubines or anything of that sort. And if there is a threesome chapter, both MC and Natasha (FMC) have agreed about it and it will only be a one night stand.2) Female Lead: one of the most important factors of any story with romance in it. She is a human, but no ordinary one. She is very overpowered, but hides it and uses her weakest Job to strengthen it and raise that Job's Job Level. Not only is she powerful by herself, she is also cool headed, rational, and doesn't have a single problem with shedding blood and killing. She isn't some bashful maiden either. She's a confident and calm headed mommy dommy. So expect some teasing from her to MC đ. (But MC isn't a sub though, I'll clarify that. They're both doms, and they will battle for dominance between each other.)3) MC isn't a passive wimp or a simp. He will also not be afraid of fighting any gender or of any age. In fact, he's actually pretty insane, so he loves fighting to begin with.4) The tags you can expect:18 (smuts)Single female leadGore (slight or extreme)Cruel MCGame-like world (levels, stats, etc)OP MC (in the future)OP FMCMommy dommy FMC
Reborn as a Dragon in a fantasy world: Picked up by a genius redheaded
That_One_Dead_Ali
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... the power scaling and stat system you have going on being different for humans compared to monsters and also dragons makes should be simplified tbh it may be fine for you as an author but for readers who are often reading multiple books simple power scaling systems are more appreciated over complex ones that are hard to remember like yours the ranks and levels are fine but labeling the ranks different and having multiple ways to calculate the stats for different species makes it rather messy you could instead just say at like rank A dragons have 5 times the stats of humans of the same rank and it's much easier to remember (that's just an example)
the titles will be used along with the Lv, so remembering them won't be needed. the power scaling isn't complicated either if you understand it. it's just like you said, it's literally there with how many times they're stronger. also, readers don't need to remember since I put the levels there along with the range of their Stats
killersoul:... the power scaling and stat system you have going on being different for humans compared to monsters and also dragons makes should be simplified tbh it may be fine for you as an author but for readers who are often reading multiple books simple power scaling systems are more appreciated over complex ones that are hard to remember like yours the ranks and levels are fine but labeling the ranks different and having multiple ways to calculate the stats for different species makes it rather messy you could instead just say at like rank A dragons have 5 times the stats of humans of the same rank and it's much easier to remember (that's just an example)