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Ornoth
OrnothLv132yr
2023-04-03 15:18

Overall it's just another junkfood trash harem CN novel with the System. IMO the System feels out of place and shouldn't have been added in this novel but hey, it's only an opinion. Anyways I have to drop this because I'm quite tired of characters mocking the MC when the MC did nothing at all. Like why? What's the point? He didn't even start cultivating yet and they kept trashing him, are they all bunch of braindead? Do they have brainrot? We're they not raised by their mothers? Do they not have father figures? I'm sick reading this kind of characters. One look at this novel and I can tell that it's gonna be full of Faceslapping and arrogant Young Masters all over the place. And of course there's definitely gonna be a bunch of r*pist that will covet MC's Jade Beauty which of course the MC will save at the very last possible millisecond. This is what I feel after reading within 20 chapters. And I know there are people that will tell me to read more and give it more chance but this is the first impression I get reading this and for me it's important since it will decide whether I will invest time reading this or not. I basically read this kind of novel dozens and dozens of times already and I'm not quite keen to add another one. That's all, bye.

On The Path Of Cultivation To Become God

Lord_Olethros
4.1
372 Chs

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Lord_Olethros
Lord_OlethrosAuthor

Well, that was pretty deep, but hey everyone is allowed to have their own opinion, so I don't mind. On the contrary, I appreciate you taking some of your time to review my novel, which I appreciate.

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Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv4

Though I don't appreciate the clichés and needless face slapping, I can appreciate this attitude. If this is the type of novel you want to write, more power to you.

Lord_Olethros:Well, that was pretty deep, but hey everyone is allowed to have their own opinion, so I don't mind. On the contrary, I appreciate you taking some of your time to review my novel, which I appreciate.
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Divine_rod
Divine_rodLv4

Lol you do know you copy pasted another novel . And you're talkin about opinion here 😂😂😂🤣

Lord_Olethros:Well, that was pretty deep, but hey everyone is allowed to have their own opinion, so I don't mind. On the contrary, I appreciate you taking some of your time to review my novel, which I appreciate.
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Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

I stoped at chapter 15 I think 🤔

1yr
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Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorLv4

are you sure if it is then that is a serious copyright issue

Divine_rod:Lol you do know you copy pasted another novel . And you're talkin about opinion here 😂😂😂🤣
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Lord_Olethros
Lord_OlethrosAuthor

I admit that I Shamelessly gave my story a 5-star review. So what? I hope you guys enjoy reading this story as I will put in my utmost effort to make the novel pleasing to read so I hope whoever read this novel to not give up on it thanks 😊

2yr

GD_Cruz
GD_CruzLv5

LitRPG and Cultivation tropes go to war in this stylish, action-packed tale of heroics influenced by eastern fantasy progression stories but still manages to make itself stand out and be its own thing. The writing is excellent, the characters don't feel flat -- with a very driven protagonist to boot -- and the world-building's interesting enough to keep you wanting to turn the page. I highly recommend this to my fellow readers, especially those looking for more cultivation!

2yr
Its_Over9999
Its_Over9999Lv2

The beginning of the novel was impressive, and I encourage the author to continue this excellent work. By the way, I have a question, will the protagonist's aunt and sisters also become part of his harem?

2yr
Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv4

The Exposition and writing are pretty alright. After that there is a sharp decline where the author blatantly pushes MC into classic situations. He coincidently gets made fun of so he can slap people's faces. He coincidently gets pushed into making a harem. You get the point, endless feel good Chinese webnovel clichés.

1yr
Sagebigi
SagebigiLv4

the novel is good but it just too slow and the mc is kind of weak with is kind cheat what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm

7mth
beyonde_thesky
beyonde_theskyLv2

After reading Chapter 30, I can conclude that the plot is not bad, Although there may be areas that could benefit from further development. Overall if you want to pass your time it's a great story for that.

2yr
mattfuncool
mattfuncoolLv5

so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.

2yr
wolfking12
wolfking12Lv2

A good novel so far, the grammar is not bad it's readable, and the update is daily so that is a plus I hope the author doesn't drop it like other authors.

2yr
master_shado
master_shadoLv3

I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.

2yr
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