Review Detail of CSK2023 in THE MAFIA'S REVENGE
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Dialogues with the characters are great it will better if more characters are added to the work and and with more chapters it will be an interesting read
THE MAFIA'S REVENGE
AYESHA_FAHIM
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First the story must be seamlessly connected and there must be ton of characters with their own past and worldview.Second no plot holes and things that make the work predictable.There must be an iconic villain.Think about these two points first.
AYESHA_FAHIM:So, what are the improvements you want me to make to get 4.5 stars from reader like you? I'd like to hear about it😊
I did give 3.8 because I have read many novels from western ones to light novels to manga,manhua,manhwa, various movies from Hollywood,Korean, bollywood,Tamil,British and Irish and various podcasts and have arrived at a place where it really hard me to get excited about any story,book,novel so getting a 4 or more star from me will really be difficult until it is really an amazing work.
Well, don't you think you shouldn't compare? After all, most Western literature is excellent, and the ones you cited are well-recognized and acclaimed. Everything has its own charm and elegance, thus I don't think you should compare these novels to any other common books. Until and unless you start comparing our books to other high-level books, they are good and easy to read.
CSK2023:I did give 3.8 because I have read many novels from western ones to light novels to manga,manhua,manhwa, various movies from Hollywood,Korean, bollywood,Tamil,British and Irish and various podcasts and have arrived at a place where it really hard me to get excited about any story,book,novel so getting a 4 or more star from me will really be difficult until it is really an amazing work.
No,I am talking about the feeling one get when one read a book,like when you watched an incredible movie or an epic anime or a very good novel.you got a feeling what did I just read, or watched it was incredible kind of thing.only then I think about giving a book a movie a 4.5 star review.
AYESHA_FAHIM:Well, don't you think you shouldn't compare? After all, most Western literature is excellent, and the ones you cited are well-recognized and acclaimed. Everything has its own charm and elegance, thus I don't think you should compare these novels to any other common books. Until and unless you start comparing our books to other high-level books, they are good and easy to read.
So, what are the improvements you want me to make to get 4.5 stars from reader like you? I'd like to hear about it😊
CSK2023:No,I am talking about the feeling one get when one read a book,like when you watched an incredible movie or an epic anime or a very good novel.you got a feeling what did I just read, or watched it was incredible kind of thing.only then I think about giving a book a movie a 4.5 star review.
I appreciate your advice. BUT with regard to the first point, they do have interesting pasts, which are yet to be revealed and are probably the main point of my story. With regard to the second point, my villain hasn't yet made an appearance, but I can assure you that he will be memorable and ruthless enough to remember.😗 Anything else for me to improve?
CSK2023:First the story must be seamlessly connected and there must be ton of characters with their own past and worldview.Second no plot holes and things that make the work predictable.There must be an iconic villain.Think about these two points first.