The story makes sense and works well but the only thing that bothers me is issei's inclusion in the story but that might change so wish you luck.
The_Greedy_Frog
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LIKEKhalderas:could to keep me posted if you continue to read this? I'm always wary of DxD fics that keep Issei around, I just can't stand him in a fic setting
¿?? be more coherent boy...no one would be nobody without his qualities and abilities...in this case issei was lucky enough to be born with draig
CONNER_Jackson:without his powers, he would have been a nobody
Without his power, he would probably be kicked out of the school for being a pervert with the other two
RemindToMe:¿?? be more coherent boy...no one would be nobody without his qualities and abilities...in this case issei was lucky enough to be born with draig
CONNER_Jackson:Without his power, he would probably be kicked out of the school for being a pervert with the other two
SleepingSinner:isn't that like almost every single characters out there?