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Review Detail of Bored_Crow in DxD: The Plunder System

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Bored_Crow
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The story makes sense and works well but the only thing that bothers me is issei's inclusion in the story but that might change so wish you luck.

DxD: The Plunder System

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Khalderas
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could to keep me posted if you continue to read this? I'm always wary of DxD fics that keep Issei around, I just can't stand him in a fic setting

please_be_gentle_
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Issei is a major plot character at this point

Khalderas:could to keep me posted if you continue to read this? I'm always wary of DxD fics that keep Issei around, I just can't stand him in a fic setting
CONNER_Jackson
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without his powers, he would have been a nobody

please_be_gentle_:Issei is a major plot character at this point
SleepingSinner
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isn't that like almost every single characters out there?

CONNER_Jackson:without his powers, he would have been a nobody
RemindToMe
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¿?? be more coherent boy...no one would be nobody without his qualities and abilities...in this case issei was lucky enough to be born with draig

CONNER_Jackson:without his powers, he would have been a nobody
CONNER_Jackson
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Without his power, he would probably be kicked out of the school for being a pervert with the other two

RemindToMe:¿?? be more coherent boy...no one would be nobody without his qualities and abilities...in this case issei was lucky enough to be born with draig
RemindToMe
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I see you have extra chromosomes

CONNER_Jackson:Without his power, he would probably be kicked out of the school for being a pervert with the other two
Long_Hao_Chen
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And different, ddraig can be stolen, it's not a natural power of it

SleepingSinner:isn't that like almost every single characters out there?