Well, read and enjoy my dear readers. Also I gave myself five starts cuz why not?

good story. a bit concerned your trying yo make yo harem to big. think more than 4 would be to much. other than that no complants. rn its basically 9 tails, tenten, and hinita. hope tsunade is in. either way its yo choice. keep up the good work.

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

I am reading 16 episodes and in general, it is entertaining to read because the author follows almost all the ideas of his readers, he also has good grammar and makes everything go well, so this is just beginning and for the future it will be a very good story.

pretty good story plz dont drop and my earnest request is to post regularly.

Evaluation: Below Average. WQ: Several gramm errors which can be improved on as the story progress. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs inaction to progress further by leaving the village is really lackluster and too dumb for my opinion just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for NarutoVerse. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update matches the quality of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 My opinion: Could've been better to make a new plot rather than doing the same thing as other Naruto FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

It's overall a nice novel all Naruto fans must read it i am supporting you go on :)

The story development is good tbh, but the character design leaves more to be desired. he's or was an adult for god's sake and the way he readins is no way for an adult should reason. And this is simply a wish fulfilment ff but it's too much. What? if you wanted the full Otsustsuki package why didn't you just become a SI in the Uchiha, Senju, Hyuga or Uzumaki clan while also wishing for a chakra breeder reactor, that way we'll know what we came to read. this is just you destroying my perfect Naruto story. You're just redoing the whole Naruto plot with slight deviations. It gets boring fast NB: This isn't me being rude or overly criticizing you. This is my honest thoughts, author. do with it as you see fit.

le daré una oportunidad, porque? porque no? y le daré 5 estrellas, porque? por que no?

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