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Infinite_Shadow_57Lv141yr
2023-03-17 19:16

Tbh, it was good at first. Until he hopped to Konosuba, which was a mix of it and Akame Ga Kill. And from there it went down hill. Let's see, Konosuba MC dies along with Aqua and Megumin, Megumin was actually a bully to YunYun, Darkness had her eyes ripped out at 13 by her sister for speaking out against the Empire. Chris was Eris from Konosuba's avatar which severed developed a personality and decided to join the demon king which it's Armies seem strong and far more evil that the OG Konosuba. Oh yes some background stuff happened with Tanya the Evil seemingly killing a diety called Being X which was taking power from planewalkers which our MC is, also Sun Wukong is apparently feared by all gods and has interest in our mc and his group. All in all its a cluster f*** of a story. Though, the writing quality and updating stability is really good.

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InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodAuthor

Sorry you didn't like it, but I'm glad you didn't 1 star me :D thanks for trying!

JoyousRebellion
JoyousRebellionLv1

Bruhh this looks like total chaos

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Oh it is

JoyousRebellion:Bruhh this looks like total chaos
JoyousRebellion
JoyousRebellionLv1

I quickly read it till the chap Mc shared his powers with night raid, and it is chaotic af. My head hurt trying to keep up with everything and I just stopped reading... I don't see a single reason why anyone would ever share their hax essence powers unless they are at least 10 levels above everyone, no even then, I would not share them!

Infinite_Shadow_57:Oh it is
Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Ikr. Don't even get me started on the need to even give power to people he'll likely never see again. Or all the other reincarnators/transmigrators.

JoyousRebellion:I quickly read it till the chap Mc shared his powers with night raid, and it is chaotic af. My head hurt trying to keep up with everything and I just stopped reading... I don't see a single reason why anyone would ever share their hax essence powers unless they are at least 10 levels above everyone, no even then, I would not share them!
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