Review Detail of ThockyKeyboard in A Slice of Cultivator's Life

Hello Author here, I thought I should give my own story a review so here we go. Grammar and tense wise this book should be readable. It is far from perfect and what I wished it to be. Please point out my mistakes and how I could make it better. English is not exactly my mother tongue. About The story: The story revolves around a group of Cultivators who wished to build their own Sect. Simple synopsis right? Cause the story trench goes deep if I try to explain everything here it'll take too long. My suggestion, just give it a read up to chapter 50. There is quite a large cast, but if you told me to pick only three main characters it will be the baby, the little ghost, and the sleepy boy. For the first 50 chapters the story pacing is rather slow. "this story is a slice of life pertaining the side quests of a cultivators life" would be my reason for the slow pacing. But it's a rather soddy one. I will try my best to make the story engaging. If I may confess, in reality the chapter's lengths is 3k words but I have to split it to 1.5k/chapter. Since I noticed that the Webnovel audience demands frequent posts rather than lengthy chapters most of the time. Lastly I can promise to update everyday up to chapter 50. So don't be afraid to try reading my story.