A pleasant description that is light and flows like rivers. A great read nonetheless! Good job. Also I like the MC, and the story is engaging too! kudos to the narrative! Good luck in the future!

What stands out is the good description of thoughts and some scenes that are easy to read. But the dialogue does not directly reflect in the dialogue itself who speaks and with what intonation. And when more than 2 characters are involved. There is confusion. There is very little information about the world for chapter 21, nothing is really known, except that they are located on one of the continents. The story of the protagonist's brother is also not fully disclosed. The werewolf, as I understand it, is still a puppy, and later we learn that he is a representative of a dangerous clan. I hope the author will tell about everything in more detail.

I had Soo much fun reading this. The heroine is so cool and I love the descriptions

The author does not mess with description. Every single detail makes it impossible to even miss a single item inside any sort of scene. Amazing job.

I think this book is very good. I will say, the descriptions can sometimes take you out of the actual story, but besides that, it is written well. The world building is life-life. When needed, the story and world building is definitely there. Good job!

It's well descriptive that's for sure, the way you explain... no how you show us the imagery of every scenes was something that is above novice, this book really gives you that vibes. I like to see you rise, so I'll continue with my support. good luck!

The beginning pulls you in and makes you feel exactly what the characters are feeling. The writing style is incredibly rich, though there are some grammatical errors, it's not to the point that it ruins the reading experience. Highly recommend this and can't wait to see where it goes.

I just read the first few chapters and I have to say that I admire your creativity in this story. You are the kind of author who deserves to be supported. Keep writing

I found this novel to be an enjoyable and well-written book. The characters were fleshed out and relatable, and the plot was engaging from start to finish of every chapter. The author's writing style was easy to follow and kept me engaged throughout the story.

One of the few 5 stars I accorded. Well deserved, but there is still room for improvement. Your writing quality is excellent, and the premise itself is original and has the hallmarks of a top 10 candidate. I strongly recommend people to patiently give 10 chapters a try and judge for themselves. I reckon they won't be disappointed. As I advised on Discord, I think your retention might suffer a little due to a slower pacing. Compared to what your average WN reader enjoys, yours takes a while to get into the thick of it. Best of luck. <3