I found this novel to be a compelling and enjoyable read. The plot was engaging and kept me invested in the story from beginning to end. However, one area where I feel the novel could use improvement is in its grammar. There were a number of grammatical errors throughout the book that were slightly distracting and took away from the flow of the story.
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LIKEI went back through and read the first 3 chapters trying to spot any errors but I couldn't find any other than very few unnecessary ellipsis but that also was dependant on the situation. Not sure if I mixed up your novel with another one I was reading. I'll re-review your novel.
shypotattoo:Hi there, could you do me a favor and point out some of the grammar mistakes you spotted! Would be a great help <3 Thank you!