I only read until Chapter 5, here's what I think of the book 🌞 Writing - The author's writing skill is better than I expected. The descriptions are lovely and carefully crafted by her. The sentence structures are decent too, just many paragraphs are too long. Try to balance between the 'show' and 'tell' because 'telling' takes over the story so far. And minor grammar mistakes including the using of present tense instead of past tense. This is apparent in the synopsis too. Plot - It's too early to decide. The King should be the ML. I like how respectful he is so far. The FL seems to have a good head on her shoulders. She doesn't blindly continue to pay loyalty to the empire that has betrayed her. Her resolve and trauma might be the driving force if she decides to avenge herself and her family Just a note, I know the author doesn't want pointless reviews from authors who are swapping them but, it's better to have at least 10 just to push your book to the rankings. But, it's still up to you 🌞 All in all, the author has what it takes to excel in writing a book. Continue learning and all the best!
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