The writing quality is good. However, there are sometimes spelling and grammatical mistakes. This is an AU story, so there are quite a few differences from the source. The author needs to work on consistency with his characters traits and emotions. I personally do not like how the main character has been turned into a whinny little bitch. with a migrated soul and knowledge, you would think he would be more mature and less inclined to mental instability. This review is posted after reading chapter 60. I will update if he improves at all.
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