Review Detail of o1dVersion in Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

So far, very interesting story. Good plot, world building, characters, humour. Many things are done just right. He'll, this work has some of the best villains you can find in the novels.Now, to a less pleasant part - glaring issue that is an art of exposure. Informing reader in a subtle and interesting way, is a very hard part of writing. Unfortunately, it's also a biggest weakness of this work. Many dialogues feel - forced and explanations - unnecessary or uninteresting. Not because information itself is boring, but because of how and when it's delivered. I really hope author will read up on different techniques on how to do exposure. That would make this work truly great instead of "just" good.Still, I'm very happy I stumbled upon this gem. I'm expecting great things from this author.