Really good fic. Right now I don`t have any remarks, except only I find it too weird, that Sarutobi let two 3 year old live by themself. You can say that it`s Naruto world, they already started killing people in 7 years, but come on. 3 years old. Not even 6! 3! And she already has a shop and her own apps? I personally really can`t believe it even though it`s Naruto world. I think at that time period you are only existing, not living. But that`s just my problem. That`s the only thing that I didn`t like. Everything else is amazing. This fic has a lot of potential. The only thing that could genuinely make me stop reading this is a reverse harem. If the author makes something like the MC corrupting not only Naruto but also someone else, then I'm out. But if not that story easily could become one of my favourite.
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