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JesseCooksMeth
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2023-04-06 00:35

the plot is unveiling slowly and I love it. One of the best novels I've read, highly recommend [img=update]

Condemned Hymn: Avatar of Sin

Omniverse_Creator
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168 Chs

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Omniverse_Creator
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A shameless review from the author here. I hope you enjoy the story that I made seriously, I had to reupload it for WSA since I want to increase the traction of my novel. The title is a bit confusing, but it's related to the story. Should I change into something more straightforward? xD. It's pretty light-hearted especially for the topic and I hope you'll enjoy it!

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Luffyloo
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From the chapters released so far, I find the main character to be too contradictory. Someone who is very stubborn and inquisitive would not be so submissive and accommodating just because someone says so. As a detective, you would think he would have a problem with all the lying his family/close ones have done his entire life. But he just accepts it in a few sentences? This ruined my enjoyment of the novel. It makes no sense, and in turn, makes this work hard to continue with. Cheers for putting your work out there though!

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Satan_Is_Reborned
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Very cool story with a very nice aesthetic. I really love MC's relationship with the FL. so might I ask, how many girls do you think MC will end up with?

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Summoner_Unknown
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This is my first review in webnovel since I really like the work. It's by far the most unique thing I've seen and I appreciate it very much. MC is a bit confusing though lol but I like it, no biggie. Nice job on the naming haha keep up the good work author

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Iamawakeatmidnight
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Current chapter: 24 Thoughts: chapter 23 and 24 are the best sec scenes ive seen on novels. So far, the story is very interesting s, but it feels a bit dragged out, but it's pretty good imo though I might change the rating if it keeps getting longer. Keep up the good work

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I_love_Ram
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I forgot to review here since I left a review on the other one. I still rate five stares cuz I like your books. Very slow but very well paced. I like the vibe and I like the way it isn't as big as others

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Daoistlv8pTX
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one of the few times that I read the first chapter and felt the need to drop a five stars review.

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Reveal spoiler

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ImTheUndefeatable
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After reading this consistently for the past few months, I can confidently say this is an amazing work. I absolutely love the dynamic between the characters and how you didn't rush the relationships between them for the sake of getting more popular. The events had also started getting exciting too. Can't wait for more chapters to come out.

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LeafShadow
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Im at chapter 100 and its going pretty good. Some minor spelling errors here and there and maybe botched phrases but the writer fixed some of it. He doesn't reply 😂 but its fine. Story is ok, but is going pretty slow but I'll still keep reading since I like it.

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