Review Detail of Re_shin in Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord
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Plot: A supernatural setting with werewolves, vampires, witches, etc. set in modern times. It's not an original subject, but it's a great one for modern Fantasy fans.There are too many unnecessary twists and it becomes difficult to follow the subject. Mc: In these 100 episodes, the MC awakens and discovers himself. While trying to make sense of her past through dreams, he tries to cope with his own feelings as his love problems increase. So far it has nothing to do with the word alpha. It is constantly being dragged from place to place or used as a toy. The girl he fell in love with is dating another guy. He can't save another girl he likes from his bad fiancee. Generally weak character. Harem: It does not have an official harem for now. So far, there are 5 potential harem members. These characters are hard to follow as there are so many twists and turns. When the character first appears, he describes their physical appearance, but then doesn't describe it at all. After a while, they forget their appearance and turn into 1D characters. Side-characters: The side character is good for now. An ultimate Villain has not been introduced. Result: A novel with potential. But it often gives the reader an unsatisfied feeling. For now, I will rely on this potential and continue. I wish you further development. THANKS.
Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord
MZAF
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Please tell me the MC is a Werewolf Ive been looking for another novel similar to "My three wives are beautiful vampires"in which their are Vampires,werewolf and other supernatural related novels,but the MC is a werewolf instead of vampire
MZAF:Thank you for your feedback. I will take this into consideration for future chapters. To be honest, from Chapter 100 until the latest chapters, the focus now shifts more towards the main character (MC) as I have already established the world so the cool stuff are now being introduced . To addressed some questions . Twist: Think of it as a puzzle scattered around. Simply put, these twists have some information or relevance that will be revealed in later chapters. All of them are important because I want my readers to experience satisfaction the moment they piece the puzzle together. Character Descriptions:I didn't want to repeatedly describe the character's appearance, as it would be a waste of words. The price per chapter depends on the word count of each chapter. And I rely on "you" my supporters to continue this book . Ultimate Villain : The Unknown Beings controlling the world in the shadows. Alpha traits : Vincent has been exhibiting certain traits of an Alpha, but I am cautious about rushing his character development. I understand the importance of not simply making him instantly perfect, awesome, or cool without proper story progression. Such an approach may provide temporary satisfaction but would ultimately undermine the integrity of the entire novel in the long run.
Thank you for your feedback. I will take this into consideration for future chapters. To be honest, from Chapter 100 until the latest chapters, the focus now shifts more towards the main character (MC) as I have already established the world so the cool stuff are now being introduced . To addressed some questions . Twist: Think of it as a puzzle scattered around. Simply put, these twists have some information or relevance that will be revealed in later chapters. All of them are important because I want my readers to experience satisfaction the moment they piece the puzzle together. Character Descriptions:I didn't want to repeatedly describe the character's appearance, as it would be a waste of words. The price per chapter depends on the word count of each chapter. And I rely on "you" my supporters to continue this book . Ultimate Villain : The Unknown Beings controlling the world in the shadows. Alpha traits : Vincent has been exhibiting certain traits of an Alpha, but I am cautious about rushing his character development. I understand the importance of not simply making him instantly perfect, awesome, or cool without proper story progression. Such an approach may provide temporary satisfaction but would ultimately undermine the integrity of the entire novel in the long run.
MZAF:Thank you for your feedback. I will take this into consideration for future chapters. To be honest, from Chapter 100 until the latest chapters, the focus now shifts more towards the main character (MC) as I have already established the world so the cool stuff are now being introduced . To addressed some questions . Twist: Think of it as a puzzle scattered around. Simply put, these twists have some information or relevance that will be revealed in later chapters. All of them are important because I want my readers to experience satisfaction the moment they piece the puzzle together. Character Descriptions:I didn't want to repeatedly describe the character's appearance, as it would be a waste of words. The price per chapter depends on the word count of each chapter. And I rely on "you" my supporters to continue this book . Ultimate Villain : The Unknown Beings controlling the world in the shadows. Alpha traits : Vincent has been exhibiting certain traits of an Alpha, but I am cautious about rushing his character development. I understand the importance of not simply making him instantly perfect, awesome, or cool without proper story progression. Such an approach may provide temporary satisfaction but would ultimately undermine the integrity of the entire novel in the long run.
I should thank you for giving me constructive criticism . Please write more feedback in the future if you find anything wrong with the story because it will help me a lot.
Re_shin:Thanks for the explanation.
MZAF:I should thank you for giving me constructive criticism . Please write more feedback in the future if you find anything wrong with the story because it will help me a lot.
Thank you very much . It will be a very long story because this novel/world will be the foundation of my future books . đ
hot_papichulo:Yes thanks for explaining I think I understand better now myself
MZAF:I should thank you for giving me constructive criticism . Please write more feedback in the future if you find anything wrong with the story because it will help me a lot.
Vinz_Tan_5119:Please tell me the MC is a Werewolf Ive been looking for another novel similar to "My three wives are beautiful vampires"in which their are Vampires,werewolf and other supernatural related novels,but the MC is a werewolf instead of vampire