This novel was great.. then good.. then well.. idek anymore. In the beginning the intro was pretty interesting.. the friendship was very new and well written. Also the MC was turning into someone worthy of the MC title. He had secrets about his powers origins which i found interesting. However, he then proceeds to tell his secrets to the first supernatural person that he meets. This was the first sign of “meh” in the story so i obviously kept reading. It still had loads of potential and it got better.. until the MC wins a massive fight against a traditional witch alongside a potential love interest. The love interests sister is there as well. She is a powerful witch who helps the MC win but she has ties with the government agency. After the fight the MC goes into a coma (that trope is so annoying) ..oh and guess what?? the agency shows up and takes his body with the love interests consent on the basis of running tests and to use him as a lapdog. She said itd be good for him lol. Wild. After that chapter we get too many time skips and chapters on side characters. And those chapters felt all over the place. I understand some of them were important for the progression of the story but they felt out of place honestly. Too much going on. The MC was still in a coma after a month too. Luckily the MCs body was stealthily moved out of the government agency.. so my fears of him being a lapdog disapated. however, another time skip later and he wakes up with memory loss with someone new we know nothing about. MCs just passed around like a sack of potatoes. At this point (chp 70) im just disappointed.. the author claims the next couple chapters get better as they are the MCs comeback arc.. but idek if its worth reading anymore.. when a MC loses memories hes not an MC anymore to me. Just another side character. Not to mention the past few chapters… the story just took a dissapointing turn. The whole time the MC and debbie were on the trip before the witch fight.. i was eager for the MC to meet his friend again afterwards. I felt enough time would be passed for the MC to understand himself and have a clear goal in mind. Heck perhaps he would learn how to create his own pack.. the ideas were limitless. But all of that was ruined after the stupid coma chapters.
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I understand your feedback, and I also realized this, but it was too late. However, I made sure to tie up the loose ends in future chapters. So far, most of my readers have started coming back and are satisfied with the new development.
Well.. how long until his memories come back? Like how many chapters?
Until Chapter Recall
Man.. i skimmed through. Seemed too long an arc. Felt like fir was a completely new MC thrown in the story. I wanted to see vincents interactions with all these new characters but at this point its ruined for me. Gonna drop this. Everything feels unsatisfying now. i wish you the best of luck though.
It's alright . Maybe in the far future you will have a change of heart . Its my fault for thinking that it was a short arc because I was looking at it in my perspective . My estimated chapter for this novel was minimum 1000 chapters . Regardless , I still appreciate your support and feedback. I took note of everything so I can avoid those mistakes in my future works.
